John was nice enough to critique my go at this Rod Scribner drawing. I tried to follow John's advice as best as my pencil will let me. I don't think the details on both of Bugs and Willoughby are as crammed together as my first attempt. I corrected the angle of Bugs' neck and also the tilt of the head. Willoughby's head could stand to be tilted just a little more. Not perfect by any means but there's some improvement.
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
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6 comments:
You're really getting a feel for those wrinkles and the fatures are fitting better.
Quite an improvement!
Hi Kevin, this one's really much better than your first one! you can see the progression, by the way your blog Cartoons, Model Sheets... it's excellent! I check it out almost everyday!
great studies KEVIN!!!! :0
You're really gettin' better.
Hey Kevin
it's great! 500% better and very solid.
nice work kevin
Why don't you hurry the fuck up with your next post?
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