Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Heckling Hare-2nd Attempt

John was nice enough to critique my go at this Rod Scribner drawing. I tried to follow John's advice as best as my pencil will let me. I don't think the details on both of Bugs and Willoughby are as crammed together as my first attempt. I corrected the angle of Bugs' neck and also the tilt of the head. Willoughby's head could stand to be tilted just a little more. Not perfect by any means but there's some improvement.

6 comments:

Craig D said...

You're really getting a feel for those wrinkles and the fatures are fitting better.

Quite an improvement!

Agustin Croxatto said...

Hi Kevin, this one's really much better than your first one! you can see the progression, by the way your blog Cartoons, Model Sheets... it's excellent! I check it out almost everyday!

benj said...

great studies KEVIN!!!! :0
You're really gettin' better.

JohnK said...

Hey Kevin

it's great! 500% better and very solid.

ryan said...

nice work kevin

Anonymous said...

Why don't you hurry the fuck up with your next post?